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Heather

Delicate pink, vibrant purple, blazing white
Roaming the moors, wild, unbridled, free
Sewn together, bound tight, a patchwork quilt
You could cross the hills on the backs
Of such a timeless, romantic herd

Or perhaps in the shadow of a church alcove
Wrapped in purple on an Easter morning
Strands of minute bells laughing and chiming
Blooming for me, with love.  They are
Domesticated, and the first of my herd

Author notes

Heather is my favorite flower, whether it is blanketing the moors or livening up my flowerbed, I love it.  Thanks, dear for starting my "herd."  It was one of the best presents I've ever received.
=^..^=
Written August 31st, 2003

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  • Samplette gold member
    September 19, 2003
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    I see the blossoming flowers and smell their fragrant beauty.
    Such a vivid write. Quite graceful.

    Very nice

    Sam


  • September 3, 2003
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    "You could cross the hills on the backs
    Of such a timeless, romantic herd"

    Very original. Read all the poems in this contest and I really like this one. Best of luck.


  • YerTweetyness
    September 2, 2003
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    Excellent POEM !!!!!!!!!!!

    How beautiful !! I love the way you wrote this piece ! More my style .. Very Very Nice !! Good Luck !

    Yertweetyness