Go ahead put all the blame on me,
For all who put you in misery.
I'm sorry for all the tears you have cried,
I'm sorry for the times you wish you could die.
For the love you try and show,
Everybody walks around like nobody knows.
Go ahead and put all the blame on me,
For I am here to listen you see.
Just pour out your soul,
Go ahead let all your pain go.
When times feel so bad,
Your heart feels so sad.
I'm sorry for all the harsh things that have been said,
I'm sorry for the times for all the nights you haven't slept.
I know how to heal your pain it will take some time,
Together we will climb until a beautiful sunset meets our eyes.
I will give you a helping hand,
For I am here for you understand.
Go ahead and put all the blame on me,
For I am here to listen you see.
Author notes
Writen for everybody and anybody who need some help or guidance or just someone to talk to.
Love
Amber
A contest entry
- A friend that hurts by FreeFalling911.
540 points, ended October 26, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, Amber, this is so sweet, so emotional and yet, strong and giving. Such a kind heart you have
lol
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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Amber,
I applaud you on this one. Very well written. I love it! You remind me more of me with your writing.
~Donna~
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good job
I loved this. it has alot of emotion in it. I like how it seems like its okay to put the blame on you even though it might hurt. thank you for entering my contest -
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I wrote this poem because there so many people going through rough times in their lives and they are hurting themselves for it and keeping all their emotions bottled up inside. So I wrote it for people to come to me and just pour out what they are feeling like they are blaming me but really I'm there to listen what they say because some people they try and let others know "hey" I'm hurting here I'm on the edge please help me, and nobody listens. So I wrote this to tell people "Yes" I will listen to what you need to say and how your feeling. It can make a big difference in peoples lives if other people just listen to them and their actions.
Thank you for reading my poem an I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Amber aka midnight eyes
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This is a good piece. I like it alot,I do think the big gaps in spaces takes away from the poem a bit but non the less it is an amazing write.
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Thanks for reading and the advise.
Amber
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It's a really pretty poem, and although the rhyming or lackthereof was like whaa? at some times, overall, I think it was pretty fuckin' spectacular.
My favorite part:
"I know how to heal your pain it will take some time,
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Smiles thanks for reading.
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It's a very good written poem. I like it. You're a great, special person Amber and I know you can help people. Nice job.
Keep writing and God Bless
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aww thank you.
Amber
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I love this poem i really like how it sounds and all. I think that it sounds so good like this and i hope we can im again some time.
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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This is good
I like the poem and yes to see when another is hurting and you talk with them is the best. On the one line that says go head I think you mean go ahead thats the only word misspelled there -
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ok thank you for helping.
Amber
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