When times get rough and grey
and darkness seems to loom,
know that every morning
with the setting of the moon...
comes a fresh new start
where sun peeks over land,
a brand new canvas of the world
to mold within your hands.
Author notes
Not exactly in a sunny mood, so this sucks. But I didn't bail out on ya.
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A contest entry
- Quickie Time (PIF) by Riftkin.
450 points, ended July 24, 2007, 9 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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No this does not suck. It reflects being in a bad place looking toward the coming of the light. Well done. Congratulations on the shiny.
Jeannie
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Thank you Jeannie. Felt really shitty last night, so when the prompt of sunshine came up, I thought oh shit! Appreciate the comments hun.
Storm
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Beautiful
Paints a great serene picture. Nicely done and good flow !
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awesome this is a great poem
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This is great! Nice rhythm and flow in this piece! Good luck to you!
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sucks? I think not
nicely done, considering that the sun isn't with you bonne chance, my friend -
Nicely done for the prompt, better than mine for sure. i like it. Best of luck in the contest...Scott
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Prompt: Sunshine
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