With but a glimpse of your eyes...
I know I'm done for...
The person I love, and I do mean love,
will not begin to understand.
The power you somehow hold over me
is enough to break me in two...
If only you could split me;
one for her...
and one for you...
As soon as you enter the room
my knees go weak...
sweat beads on my forehead...
Because I know...
and because you know...
That I can't say no...
Not ever...
Not to you.
A contest entry
- CLASSIC AFFAIRS by SummerlandRayne.
479 points, ended July 26, 2007, 7 entries
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Oh me like this. You did a great job with this. I applaude you cause I think I am going to bookmark this cause I like it so much. Great descriptions and wording I love the last part of the poem. Great job keep it up.
Never give up
Kate
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Well thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Well...that is just a wonderful descriptive poem. Your words have certainly captured the essence of how one will go to great distances for the sake of a feeling. Love it!!! Thanks for the entry and best of luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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Thank you!
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Wow!!
Oy!!
What images this brings forth and the Passion through each line
Bravo on this piece!!
Sees this person has a Powerful hold on Spirit
which shines through Your words!
Thank You for sharing this!
Appreciate Your visit to my pieces
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Well thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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