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The Scar

It tells a story
Not like the savior from glory
For HIS scars bore the sins of my life
And the strife that it carries

My scar, the one that you can see
Tells of the pain of my love
For one that withholds it from me
Rips it from my grip
Dropping me into a bottomless pit
Where I’m falling, sinking like a stone
Redefining the abyss of my soul
To me in varying arrays of colors and images

It isn’t quite healed
It’s still tender to the touch
For each and every time I feel
That I can handle much much more
That what most have in store
I slip, I fall, I stumble, I call out to anyone
That can help me
Survive

Stitches
Band-aids
Neither seem to stop the flow of blood
That pours down to the ground
It does resound
Deep within my mind

The Scar

It may never heal
For that which brought the pain
Has never taught a more challenging  refrain
And now has laid a significant claim
To my mind, my heart and my soul

Forever, beyond the scope of time

The Scar


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  • Sensual Sapphire
    July 25, 2007

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    The scars we carry

    come from many sources. Are they wounds we have learned from or did the lessons they had to teach get tossed aside because of pride or pain? Some wounds never heal and some scars should be displayed with pride. They are proof that we survived.


  • Sacrificial Love
    July 24, 2007
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    Oh my....

    you have really laid your soul out within your words T....

    I have so much I want to say...but won't. I know that you are absolutely incredible...if it's poetic purging...raw emotion is definitely showing through.

    I am thankful to have the opportunity to read your work...sincerely.