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My Heart in His Hands

When I think of going astray
He holds me close till the break of day
Calling to me when I lose my way
For every situation he knows just what to say.

My heart has shattered again and again
In my soul I know I must let him in
Forgetting all that has been
My time is now, not stuck in then.

Strength to move on I will find
While sweet love lingers on my mind
His comforting words makes his love defined
My heart in his hands is forever signed.

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  • anaisnais
    September 6, 2007
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    I love this written from the soul, you can feel the faith! Kindest wishes


  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    August 22, 2007
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    This is amazing! I really like how u told ur story, but rhyming it really well. Wonderful write!!