The soft satin sea beneath you
seems to hold you still in time.
Your hands, motionless,
reach behind to pull back
your flowing hair...
which flows the way a gods does.
Carved like that of the finest statues
you sit and beg to me,
silently.
If only I could cross the barrier to you.
To touch what seems to be unreal.
To experience the divine.
The pale moonlight accentuates every
flawless feature and exemplifies them
to extreme proportions.
If but only to caress the silk
that you call... skin.
If but only to taste the lush fruits
you call... lips.
If but only to travel the utopian landscape
that you call... a body.
A contest entry
- Sensual Quills ~ Men Only! by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended August 9, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Nice
A nice exploration of love expressing your desires and sensual eagerness to love and please your loved one. the if and only are great expression that show the love and longing in you.
Good luck in the contest.
Love and blessings from India - Joel -
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if but only we could all produce pieces like this, then we could call it...a whitewash.
well done my man, well done,glad your on our side.
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Quite the erotic images brought forth with your words. Soft, sensual and pleasing are but three words I can use to describe this piece. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Wow!
The quill is dancing across the pages here my Friend
Wow!
Beautifully sculptured!
especially the utopian landscape
Wonderful images You have brought forth!
Thank You for sharing Your Talent
and for commenting on my piece
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is so beautiful and sensual. I love the yearning presesnted here. Best of luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Azlyn
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Thank you again!
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