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If you're not happy and you know it

If you’re not happy and you know it
Put a bullet to your head
Put a bullet to your head
Put a bullet to your head

If you’re not happy and you know it
Slit your wrist
Slit your wrist
Slit your Wrist

If you’re not happy and you know it
Hang from a rope
Hang from a rope
Hang from a rope

If you’re dieing inside and you know it
Just deal with it or die..

I would go for the latter solution
Hahahahahaha

Author notes

yea, this is an emo style of "if you're happy and you know it"

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  • Dead Embrace
    March 5, 2008

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    Bloody hell I am speechless what a really straight to the point poem very very good! I know all too well what distructive feelings feel like. Very talented piece I must admit very srong and powerful.


  • nyc-chica420
    March 1, 2008

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    awsome poem

    i love it. it made me wanna laugh, but at the same time its dark. idk. all i can say is awsome poem and good luck in the contest

  • U.g.l.y.
    February 29, 2008
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    By the way. You forgot the "And you really want to show it".

  • U.g.l.y.
    February 29, 2008
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    BRAVO!!!