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Torn

Torn between my duty and my heart.
For so long my feelings, my true
  aspirations have eluded me
yet once regained, I must pretend
  as if they were never there.

I run to my shelter, only to find
  it battered and broken by the sands.
I have no confiding place, all that
  I thought I knew has been ripped away
and all I thought I didn't know has
  finally surfaced, only to be submerged
  again.

A care beyond comprehension, a feeling
  beyond words, and yet not allowed.
For I am no longer important, if I ever was.
I dare not speak, for fear of anger
  and rejection.

But amidst all the suffering, there
  is one thing, one feeling,
that still remains...


I love you.


Author notes

I wrote this probably at least 3 years ago, back in high school at some point. I found it today when I was cleaning my room, so I figured I'd post it. Not as cheery as I usually like doin' em, but eh, was an interesting point in my life.

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  • mysticlabyrinth
    July 25, 2007
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    AWWWW this is SO good!!!! when i saw the title i figured it would end up being about paper cuz all your poems end with some type of object, but this was an even more pleasant surprise! it's actually about feelings!!! anyway, i love it and you should clean your room more if this is the result!