Let the true you shine
Take off the hair
The eyelashes
All the falseness you exude
Let the real you out
Show the world who you are
Stop hiding little girl
Let them see
Don't be afraid of what they think
Because those who mind don't matter
Those who matter don't mind
Let me see
Show me you
Don't hide behind
That fake confidence
Be that scared little girl
Stop pretending to be someone else
No one cares
Your not Reddy
You never will be
Until you grow up
Realize its not all about you
Author notes
Not my best
A contest entry
- Let your pen run free! by silverscent.
450 points, ended August 5, 2007, 21 entries
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This seemed a very patronising poem, I'm not sure if it was meant to be, but it's how it came across. Also, on the second line "take off the hair" implies she's bald and is somewhat amusing. Thanks for entering.
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she is bald and wears weave
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