where are you King of my heart?
I'll think I've found you
then you'll be the one I say
try again some other day
tears spilt
pieces of my heart on the floor
then 5 minutes later
you're gone and dead in the land of my love(or so I thought)
months later
you're coming
running back
while I'm walking right on by
not meaning to be rude; but you're a prude
you're just not listening though
concentrating on how to win me back
saying sweet things
saying you know deep down in your heart you still love me
saying things I can't help but say
hey, this [insert his name here] kid, I still love him
I love the way he smiles
I love the sarcastic humor
I love the way my stomach goes when I'm just about to call him
the way I felt was too clear
I needed to tell him what he wanted to hear
I told
the reaction was pure gold
Author notes
this is more the true story verison I have another one that I wrote w/ the same title:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/show/3229462
A contest entry
- WHAT DO YOU LIKE by Elenaliz.
1000 points, ended March 20, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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hmm im not sure how to comment.i like parts of this but i think as a whole it doesnt really work for me.i mean,what its about is good its just kinda.....all over the place.
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Great write here, and thanks for the comment
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Romance seems so complicated, I don't think I could deal with such trivial, but ever enduring little insanities that people who "love" each other go through.
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