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King of Heart

where are you King of my heart?
I'll think I've found you
then you'll be the one I say
try again some other day
tears spilt
pieces of my heart on the floor
then 5 minutes later
you're gone and dead in the land of my love
months later
you're coming
running back
while I'm walking right on by
not meaning to be rude; but you're a prude
you're just not listening though
concentrating on how to win me back
I say goodbye
but that was the worst of it
say goodbye to me?-you'd rather die
you hired a man
to put enough strength in your hand
knife to your brain
a note on your bed:
I loved you,I really did, you never would understand I guess. A lyrical liar you were, that's for sure I can't live without you
a life lost
past in the dust

Author notes

inspired by a picture I drew of King of Hearts
and
the meanings of
two of spades:
Breaks in relationships; deceit. A break in an important process in the querent's life. If the question concerns a particular romantic interest, this is considered a warning card - infidelity or separation is quite likely.


five of spades:
Opposition and obstacles that are temporary; a blessing in disguise. Sometimes indicates a negative or depressed person.




nine of spades:
9 of Spades Illness, accident, bad luck. The querent is at his/her personal low.



and partially based on a true story


I'm probably going to make an alternate ending for it if I do I'll be sure to put the link here:
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3229500

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  • Diatribes
    August 27, 2007
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    "..a lyrical liar", that would be me and an entire page I devoted to writtings of mine to someone.
    I think i like this one betterthan the alt. ending one.
    Something about death just seems like the ultimate "Im sorry, please forgive me".
    (but i am just weird)