Fears of things beyond control
Hold my eyelids and my soul;
I pray the Lord that He would keep,
But then I keep, and lose my sleep;
Joys from above elate my heart,
All that’s in store and set apart;
I’m inspired to put them in words,
They rush at me like poetic herds.
A contest entry
- Closing Some Time Today by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended July 25, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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amen
We all feel like that. I like this poem
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A unique piece you have penned for this contest. None as of yet have taken such a path as this one that you have. Excellent, flow, form and rhyme. Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Wonderful Write.
Wow Bob.
You do great at these shorter poems. I love this one. Wonderful imagery and rhyme!! God Bless you, Take care, Sandy 
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Thanks, Sissy-poo!
I aperesheeate that!
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Great Reply!!
Hey, anything for a wonderful Christian brother. Thank you for all the encouragment you give to us all here. Gosd less you. Sandy
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Well done
Beautiful flow and great rythem and rhyme. Words well chosen and used. Great Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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