Along the lines of beauty
I see inside your soul
It's hollow and it's empty
Just like a punch bowl
You drawl the lines of perfect
And see what you can get
You earase all of the diffrence
That made her beautiful.
Even though she is diffrent
And cold
And shy
Please dont try to change her
She's just like any other girl or guy
She makes life pretty
And she proves that flaws are good.
Everyone is changing
So why was she the one who got hurt?
You tried to pull off her mask
You tried to pull away what made her, her
No laws stand aginst this
This isnt the way she thought of bliss
Along the lines of gorgeous
I see what i could find
I open up her eyes
And see the beauty that lies inside.
All though she may be diffrent
She is still a gift to me
She's what makes this world turn
For ever and eterity.
Author notes
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I know you wanted weird and stuff, im gonna write about that too but i wanna write about diffrence too. Hope thats ok.
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Exquisite
beautifully written honey.. the beauty is inner deep you conveyed this so well.. the imagery is amazing.. thanx for sharing.. -
Awesome!
I am sorry I havent read your poetry in a while but this was so great! I love how you compared the persons soul to a punch bowl and the ending was beautiful!
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This was a pretty good write. Very sweet almost and a very good message. A lot of girls try to be what they're not because other people say it'll make them a more "interesting" or "better" person, when in reality the're perfect the way they are.
Humans are supposed to be imperfect - it's perfect o be imperfect. (if that makes sense, lol)
Jeanette*~ -
Awwwwww
this was sweet! i loved it
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