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Peaceful Rising

The highest of peace comes through the deepest of prayers.

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Abstract from a short story authored by me, entitled, "Peaceful Rising".

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  • Superb Plus

    Ah, what a marvelous thought, and praye. You have said it quite well. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

  • Topnotchsy
    August 13, 2008

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    Love this one line all by itself. Captures a beautiful truth, and resonates. Best of luck in the contest. Time to check out another poem of yours.


  • earthstar
    October 26, 2007

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    This is so very true. Very simply and effective. Thank you for your comments on my poem. As one ages and your family goes home there are so many things I miss. It the simple ones that I miss the most. Thank you for reading my work. This is the best one liner I have ever read. Keep you faith in our Lord Jesus.


  • Vernal Bloom
    July 27, 2007
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    Hi my lovely khahar joon
    And yes, at last the time reached that I can read your works again! That is really nice. Here I’m facing just a sentence but such a great greatness is hidden in it. It was really a true sentence, sis. I do believe in it.
    Thank you so much for new lesson you taught all of us

    ~Massy~


  • Nyla
    July 27, 2007

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    How true ! Nothing in this world is so soothing as deeply felt prayers. Prayers are the best healers for our aches. And even if prayers are not fulfilled, they provide us with inner tranquility springing out from the blissful feeling of getting closer to God Almighty. This is a very nice one-liner by you; rich gem-like thoughts condensced in such a simple but heartwarming way. And I am certain the whole story would be quite thought-provoking. My dear Apee, keep writing !

    With prayers !
    Your sister
    Naila.

    P.S : Good choice of background. The page itself makes me feel so calm and relieved.








  • SeptemberFaith
    July 24, 2007
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    You got that right =) Peace can only be achieved through Him. =)

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