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[ Life is good ]

Life is good
It can be grand
Come with me
Take my hand

I'll show you a new world,
I'm sure you'll wanna see.
Trust me when I say
You should really come with me.

When I say I'm here
That means I am here for you
When I 'tie the knot'
Youre the one I want to say 'I Do'

I am crazy for someone like you,
I dont know how to explain.
You can understand my everything.
My anger, my happiness and pain.

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  • Miss Malliciouse
    August 6, 2007

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    i actually liked the part When I 'tie the knot'
    Youre the one I want to say 'I Do' wonderfull..we all write what we feel..to others it may not seem alot but only the writer knows what it really means.well done keep it up.


  • Dirty and Broken
    July 24, 2007
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    hmmm...idk...
    but i read it!


  • NeverLoseHope
    July 24, 2007
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    What a perfectly wonderful poem! It was lighthearted but still very caring and sweet. Great job!


  • ILUVuBUTuDONTluvME
    July 24, 2007
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    GREAT job!!! i loved it!


  • ChemicalArtemis
    July 24, 2007
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    Aw! It's so cute.
    *Hugs you*

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