Welcome to your own personal torture Chamber
Where the existence of your life could be Hell
Reach for the heavens but to your Dismay
You have brought this pain down upon Yourself
There is no escape from this prison's Pump
For with-in-mates, this chamber shall always Be
Although some get paroled, they'll be back in a Flash
For this chamber's torture is everyone's eventual Destiny
It's not when you'll get out, but how will you survive Within
For this labyrinth of memories, you shall always Remember
And just how does one escape from their very own Heart
When "Loves Gone Bad", and your Heart is your ~Torture Chamber~
When Love Goes Bad, There Is No Parole
One Can Only Take The Pain, Do The Time
And Hope For A Better Day
Peace
Holla @ Ja Boi
TX Leonard
Working Draft
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Hey Storm
Sorry it's takin so long for me to respond back to you. Being travelling and workign abroad in Africa and Asia. Talk about inspirations Wow. Anyway I just got back to the states for a few and then back trotting the globe.
Thanks for the comment as always. Next penning
"The Backpack R-Evolution". I think it'll explain itself" Later -
For this chamber's torture is everyone's eventual Destiny
i loved this line, infact i think that was my favourite stanza
really powerful and emotional
i liked the whole poem, it was really well written and you could tell alot of thought went into it
i really nejoyed reading it
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WOW!
That's amazing! Such a great read also. I'm going to have to add you on my favourites your so inspiring and write really well. I can refer to your work and get alot from it. Great work! -
aint dat da truth. great write!
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