we're singing weakly
under the iron- maiden stars
that tell me where to turn, and where to call
when lost
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This is really cute, reminds me of how little we are in the universe and how outta nowhere you'll realize that.
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I like this snippet. More like an after-thought while meditating over "some" special moments.
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I loved where this brings me, I donno if this was a metaphor or not, but it reminded me of how you look into the stars and you feel so tiny and you can think that there is something else out there. Can cheer anyone up. Great job.
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I felt a soul searching here J.
So few lines and still so thought
provoking to the reader.
I am reminded why I miss seeing your pen dance.
The talent has not grown dormant within you that's for certain!
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thank you very much!
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iron maiden eh?
i got a north star vibe off of this, the whole star navigation thing.
awesome.
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