Love like the beauty of a rose
free as a flower in the garden of life
a gentle breeze begins to sway
giving of life a will to be
who you are inside
how do you feel?
cold, warm, fresh as the breeze
a cloudy day above
in the sky trials abound
pouring down rain upon the flower
love soon grows ever more strong.
Love grow and grow just like the rose.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is a great poem. It was short, but had very much description. It painted a perfect picture in my mind. It left me feeling refreshed and happy. The poem contained great use of similies. The end was the best part of the poem. Great write.
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great use of you'r poetic devices. I realy liked this poem, though it was short it had a lot of meaning in it. The last line was the best of all though. and the first two were also ones of my favorite lines. great job keep up all you'r great work.
-maddie
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