An emptiness, where once was love
and broken dreams that once we bought.
Wearing pretense on worried brows,
distended pain from shattered thought.
Incessantly, the mind replays,
reconstructing each right move made.
Reassembled and reattached
and yet, the nightmares still invade.
Imprints remain within my soul,
filling the void will be a task.
I’ll miss you for, e t e r n i t y...
help dry my eyes, is all I ask.
Unknown forces flooding the mind,
suffocating, delusions chance.
This empty space where once was love,
now only holds a ghostly dance.
In a list
A contest entry
- Fill Your Void 20 Entries by Liquid memories.
475 points, ended July 25, 2007, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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beautiful written and expressing well the sadness..."I’ll miss you for, e t e r n i t y
Help dry my eyes, is all I ask..."
congratulation for the honorable winner
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Oh, so sad. Yet so well written with great images to ponder and feel. This background is a perfect match for the image, did you make it from the image by chance? Looks awesome together.
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this was a wonderful and emotionful write. im sure many people have felt what ios expressed in this. a wonderful write well done and best of luck
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very stimulating of caring where love once was. wish you success in the contest
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Thanks for the HM
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Thank you very much
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