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Give it time... im gna make you mine! (again) lol

Baby, you were so unkind
Screwing with my mind
I no ive been bad
But ive never been this sad

I hate that I can never stop loving you
I hate all the little things that you do
I hate that i can never forget
Yet never regret

I really wna get cosy
Cuddle on the sofa, pretend its all rosie
Just lay there for days
What a wonderful faze
Kiss you on your forehead
and drag you up to bed

Wake up with you by my side
and watch you while you sleep
Im really missing you now
But everyone is wondering how
Hiding all my pain
Its driving me insane

I hope you're happy
When you read this dont get snappy
Understand i just wna hold
Protect till we get old
Really hoped i could make you see
All you ever need is me

Baby I love you
Wish you loved me too
You say you still do
But right now im not for you
You wna be living your life
And not be anyones wife

Im pleased your having fun
After all your still young
Just dont put me through more pain
This heart cant take the strain

Goodbye for now
I'll make you love me somehow
Give it time
Im gna make you mine

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  • Harley.Barley
    December 19, 2007

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    I like it

    I like it

    My favorite stanza is the second one from the top
    its everything i'd ever wanted to say to an old ex of mine


  • Anastasiya
    July 25, 2007

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    This is not original. I cannot find even one line in the poem that stands out. You need to work on this poem.