Skin rips,
reveling luscious
blood
It gushes;
runing all
over my arm
Taking memories,
pain, and
love with it
The pain is
so unbearable yet,
so welcoming
I can't stop,
I love this
feeling
more pain,
more blood,
but no more memories
I am hungry
for more; thristy
for blood
I drink
until no
life is left
Bloods drips
from my
mouth
I smile;
I am a
vampire at heart
even if
it means taking
my own life
Author notes
I wrote this after I listened to Vampire Heart by HIM
A contest entry
- Vampires by love my jose luis.
300 points, ended April 29, 2008, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very nice
as the blade bites so do your teeth as the blood flows so does your life very lovely
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Wow
Brillianta as always babe you writing is soo beautiful and amazing as always I love it keep up the good work!!!!!
Love ya sis
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um... ok..........
(in a wiry voice) i giva A for Effort (even though effort starts with an E........) well u get my point (or maby u dont but anyways I get my point, but then again it is MY point so I would get it) um....... good job... (my main point = good job )
ps:to hannah: isnt it a bit overdone using curse words? i mean it doesnt seem u (but then again shit can be holy if blessed, but the sepeate point is y would anybody bless shit? i mean... its a pile of shit! but still i guess it could be a holy piece of shit, because some wierd, perverted, annoying, exeptionly energized possible hippie decided to bless a piece of shit.) ( all in the name of peace of course) hippies unite!
Hi you've reached hippies inc. This is Dakotah Speeking how may i direct your call? ....................
Im sorry, our hippies for the recreation of the mystery van group is currently away. so if you would like to leave your name, number and a pumpkin pie we would love to call you back at our nearest convenient time. ......................
have a nice day!
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So did you like it or not????
Anyways thanxs for reading it!!
Amanda
p.s. Your...Really...WERID!!!!!!
With the whole blessing of the shit... I guess you could be on to something...or maybe not....Since your a "hippie"....would you bless a pile of shit??? I just answer that and say.....YES....I mean it is you after all...
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i could just picture someone with a crazy ass smile with blood drippin down there cheeks, very nice, good imaginery
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Holy shit Amanda! This poem is AMAZING!!! Have you been practicing? You've gotten so much better! You definitely are a vampire at heart, because you understand them in a way no other vampire, or were creature, or human ever can! Keep it up babe! *high five*
Luvs from Hannah
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Thank you, Thank you
*does a little bow*
Yeah me!!! I haven't been practicing, I just haven't wrote a lot. I guess it was building up.
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vampires are cool
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Ive written a poem called vampire heart after i listened to it also. I like this alot reminds me a lil of the song. Nicely done.
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Twisted, but I like it. Got to love Vampires, you did an excellent job with this poem.
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Thanks. Yes you gotta love vampires! Anyways this is my first poem about vampires.The other ones are about love and all sorts of other crap.
Thanks again!
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