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Pain of Silence

There was always pain with my silence,
nobody understood that.
In different shades I have tasted pain,
red, blue and green.
And none was there to share my pain.
I wrote letters to me as no one was to write.
I consoled me as no one was to hold my hand.
I suffered my pains in silence.
When there was light in other person’s life,
there was darkness in my life.
Silence and darkness became my friends,
and now in this everlasting peaceful graveyard,
pain and darkness became my best friends.

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  • Bluebook Pet
    August 7, 2007

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    So sad, how sad is your life is. Living alone is such a sad part of life eventhough it may help for some reasons


  • SensualWhispers
    August 6, 2007

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    I like this

    but it seems kind of forced. I know that sounds harsh, I just don't feel this was personified as well as it could have been. Thanks for entering and the best of luck. Kassie


  • Beating gold member
    July 26, 2007
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    "There was always pain with my silence,
    nobody understood that."
    I really like those lines. I really relate to this piece, in the sence that I too have sensed the pain of silence. I think we all have. I like how you get that feeling out in your words, and the two last lines are really powerful!

  • Leaving Today
    July 24, 2007

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    I love the following lines, really creative

    "In different shades I have tasted pain,
    red, blue and green"

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