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Hearts The Colour Of Glass.

She spends days
breathing in windows
&& apologizing to sills
that never should have been used as seats.

Then counting each obscurity,
as she draws hearts
in the mist;
writing initials backwards
just in case he could read them.

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  • DrunktankLullaby
    August 3, 2007
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    aww this is beautiful!!


  • Exodus gold member
    July 26, 2007

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    Brilliant, as always. I'm beginning to think you can be nothing but
    "writing initials backwards
    just in case he could read them."
    Stunning


  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    July 25, 2007

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    "Then counting each obscurity,
    as she draws hearts
    in the mist;
    writing initials backwards
    just in case he could read them."

    AHHmazing dolly!!

    like whoa