Clenching beneath the surface
feeling so much doubt
my brain has eclipsed to wires
and I cannot find any way out.
Beyond I am seeking refuge
from a storm that just won't quit,
I cannot stop my heart
from beating till it's content.
Attempting to pass a message,
of such love that does resound;
and the only reply I can think of...
Fuck it.
I don't know what I'm doing anymore.
Please tell me what you think
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I really liked how you ended this, very... real.
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like it
you're still doing good! as always! hey sis...it's des. lylas!
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seems a bit more choppy then usual and like your heart and head are not agreeing on something
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I was just trying to write, but nothing was coming out... >< That's all I got, and it sucks. Choppy, yes... -sigh-
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