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My Love..................

Her smile was tempting, innocent and sweet,
And melodious laughing like music upbeat,
Her gait was enticing, graceful and more,
Every of her sight was full of ardour,
Never had been she bashful of whim,
Her captivating eyes led my feelings brim,
The scarlet lips were bewitching, trim,
Over which all of my sweet dreams swim!!!!
Her eyes were the deepest I see,
Naughty, larksome, magical and free,
Like her changing mood, or liberated breeze,
By her outlook could she squeezed
My heart, passion and mind too
Neither could I think, nor could I do!!!
Her fleshy thighs and awesome physique,
Dozens of thoughts and mere one freak!!!
Seven of seas and seducing Creek
Her melody turned hardest hearts meek!

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  • Emotions
    July 28, 2007
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    weldone mujtaba

    the poem depicts the intense feelings for your soulmate. congratulations

  • Dancing Doll
    July 25, 2007
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    Where were you for long?

    another heart melting piece sweet mujtaba