Two hearts destined to be together
Finally find each other
The clouds disappear
When they are near
The world seems
A better place
Colors more vivid
The puzzle complete
Once thought
Only a fairytale
A made up story
Never to be real
Now it is
And always will be
Two hearts together
One soul forever
~Tisha Rene~
Author notes
I have found the one that makes me whole, my other half, the love of my life.
Picture is The Lovers card from a Tarot Deck
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Beautfiul!
Oh sis! This is just beautiful! I think I love what love has done to you. Or shall I say... what Kris has done to you!
Very beautiful words indeed!
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My love, you just so happen to pen with such beauty and grace that it almost brings a tear to my eye. I think perhaps you have been looking right into my mind, because these are so similar to my thoughts...
The world seems
A better place
Colors more vivid
The puzzle complete
The flow of this piece is magnificent, and there is true power behind it. Bravo on a wonderful poem, but on a deeper level I want to say that I love you intensely and that is no fairy tale.
Yours forever...
~Kris
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This is fabulous, so true and so sweetly reminding us of all that is given to us in life. The gifts of love bestowed upon us, and our true chances at finding completion in another. Very well written thank you for sharing this
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love is always a wonder
but I have to ask: line 2 - it is fine or find each other?
hugs to both
B D
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A DREAM COME TRUE
Consummation and fulfilment in love, when it happens to one who is deeply in love, seems to be unbelievable. The experience appears to be out of this world - something heavenly, a dream come true. A very sweet poem I enjoyed very much.
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wow! a truly touching piece if i say so myself.
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Lovely!
Lovely to look at and lovely to read. Just one small spelling mistake with fine instead of find, its a fairy tale come to life. Isn't love grand?
Patty
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This is very sweet and loving. A great write.
The clouds disappear
When they are near
those are my favorite lines. They bring forth a snese of fulfillment, that you a content and just happy to be with each other and never want to be seperated. Great write!
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