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Inspirations of a Killer

The feeling of slicing into your prey
is the most sensual feeling of all

the way they screem and squirm just sends me through the roof
all the spatter of blood and the feeling of controle
it's almost enough to make one orgasm

the way my blade feels when I slice into your throat
is the most amazing of all
the voices in my head tell me to go deeper
all of my body wants to make it last

how can I resist the temptation of it
I must soke myself in your blood

once I am done with you I place your head on a mantle piece
for all to see
and I write what it's like when they scream

this is what it's like
this is how I feel
and God does it feel good

Author notes

Naked.

corrected a few typos

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  • iiww3443
    July 26, 2007

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    Fucking awsome

    I love it, it is indeed inspiring. I personally like "I must soke myself in your blood", the best killers, the true artists, love there work, more then that, it's like foreplay to them. You really capture that here, it wouldn't surprise me at all if you were a killer your self or at least have thought about it rather seriously for a long time. Absolutely beautiful, thanks for the read.


    • Synthetic-Nightmare
      July 30, 2007

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      HAHA

      HELL YEAH. Fuzzy has definitely conjured up some rather interesting methods of murder, you really should get him talking about it! lol. He's quite an inspiring individual.

      He might be interested in a lot of what you have to say to. If you feel up to it. =D


  • ellipsist
    July 25, 2007
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    sorry to do this to you again

    please spell check...

  • Synthetic-Nightmare
    July 24, 2007
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    FUCK FUCK FUCK!

    FUZZY, I FUCKIN LOVE YOU! HAHAHA. THIS TURNED ME ON SOOOO BADLY! Haha, just picturing it made me want to have sex with the nearest most deadly serial killer near me!!!!!!!!!!!!! mwa hahahah.

    *evil smile*


  • NickelleteXninja
    July 23, 2007

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    you know fuzz you should really try to rhyme for once..i think that with how you write that it would sound great

    great poem by the way

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