Trudging on forever
with unending roads
which are spitefully clever
and disguised with codes
You see the end
and shout out with joy
to see your friend
and with her a boy
The end has come
so let us party
with all the dumb
songs that are hearty
With tears of gratitude
you dance on forever with attitude...
A contest entry
- 13 on down... that's a nice round number...no, 14 ON DOWN! Yes, that's perfect. No, yes, no... oh, fine! 15 on down! by Ter.
600 points, ended July 27, 2007, 11 entries
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Awesome
This is good stuff, it starts out pretty bleak and frustrating and ends strong and happy. Makes me think of a person who has had a rough life and comes out better and sassier for it
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