I can begin to feel your breath shorten
as the heat of the evening starts to intensify.
Gentle touching will soon lead into
something a little more risque...
Which is perfectly OK by me;
and judging by the look in your eye...
it's perfectly OK by you too.
The candles in the room around
let their flames dance
just as we are about to.
Slowly grazing your soft skin with my hand
I can feel the goosebumps begin to form.
I've got them too...
Our eyes locked into each other;
our lips decide to follow suit.
Our hands venture on their own separate journeys...
Mine stumble upon the most glorious scenery
ever to be discovered by man.
Yours seem to be enjoying their
luxurious travels as well;
at least thats the way it feels.
Lips begin their decsent now
ever so subtly testing their
new surrouding enviroments.
I can feel yours; soft and sweet.
I can taste you; softer, sweeter.
Explosions start to fill the room
but neither of us are scared.
Only anxious.
Anxious to begin
the second half of our
incredible journey.
A contest entry
- How About Some Foreplay? by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended August 3, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very sensuos foreplay at its' finest. I'm sure the second half of the journey will be as blissful as the first part which had my attention from the get go. I want to thank you for entering my "How About Some Foreplay?" contest.
Ted E
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A very vivid bit of imagery in this. Soft and sensual, and the reader can just place themselves into the scene with ease.
Good luck in the contest
Storm -
this is great and yes that is an great foreplay
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