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Forgiveness

The defination of forgiving
means to me
to letting go our pasts
to leave it behind us.

When we do forgive
we let go our pasts
and it is relieving.
That we feel joyful.

When we don't forgive
holding onto the grudge
we become bitter
and we aren't set free.

Forgiving is so important.
We should forgive
not bring it up, again.
We don't want to hear it.

Please tell me what you think

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  • michellemybelle gold member
    July 24, 2007

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    good message. yes forgiveness is vital to complete happiness, without it we blunder through life angry and in pain.

  • littlemandy
    July 24, 2007
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    Very good. I like it all. It is a good free verse style.


  • Amera gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    Well said! This piece flows well and delivers and importiant message. You visited me so I thought I'd come to your house. I'm glad I did.

    Love,
    Amera ♥