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Over a City, Under the Stars.

Sweet Peri,
The gentle breeze kisses our shoulders softly,
Easing us into Eve.
Red wine and silhouettes illuminate the sky,
Simply you and I
Over that sweet Peri-
Free atop a rooftop,
Underneath the stars,
Heavens above winking blessings,
Whispering stories,

Through the sweet hour wind...

Dusk to dark,

Under those lovely stars.

Make a memory,

A wish,

On our red wine,

The clink of our glasses-

Nearly above the clouds,

Almost below heaven.

Summer breeze,

Baguette and cheese,

Red wine.

Magic of sorts.

Our first meal,

One last glass,

Always a memory. 

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Dinner on a roof in a Summer eve of Paris, France.
What else can I say?

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 18, 2007

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    Magic of sorts.
    Our first meal,
    One last glass,
    Always a memory.

    that would be magic


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    August 12, 2007

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    It does sound very exciting. Not to mention that the air would be filled with romance. I do love the stars in a special viewing place. I want to thank you for entering my "Let's Have Dinner" contest.

    Ted E