I'm sitting here beside you,
Underneath the moonlight,
As I slowly realize,
I love you too.
I look up into those loving eyes,
And can't stop staring.
I feel so alive.
I start to cry.
Not from sadness,
But from the pure extremity of this feeling.
I'll be here for you through all eternity,
Through all the madness.
We are lovers forever,
Hand in hand while we're lost in the
In the river of life.
Unseparable. Unchangeable. Together.
It's the end of my world,
And the beginning of ours
Author notes
I had fun writing this! I guess I was just inspired to write it after I saw the title.
Pic inspirations and other contest: option 2
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A heartfelt write. Deep expression of emotion. Good flow and tone. You express your feelings of love with such depth. Well penned and much enjoyed.
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SUCH SWEET AND LOVING THOUGHTS!!!!
You so beautifully describe how true honest love should feel like.
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Thank you!
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oh how on earth can all of you write such great great poems? hehehe i like the first stanza especially this part
As I slowly realize,
I love you too.
great job and good luck
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Very good, I love it!
This is great, I love how you tied the title in with all of it, so great job.
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