If one is unaffected by the bitter realities in life, one is disconnected from the heart.
A contest entry
- Life is full of one-liners but it's the spaces inbetween that matter most by changeisconstant.
300 points, ended August 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 75 Words Or Less (Short Poetry - Show Me What You've Got) by xxRainbowDawnxx.
450 points, ended November 25, 2007, 46 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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This message I was trying to portray to the love that I care for and adore and the one who cares and adores me now. He said he has no heart, but by feeling the anguish of life and past hurt, he has a heart. Plus he looked out for me, someone heartless wouldn't do that. I definately agree if you. If you can't feel the pains of the world, you really are disconnected.
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I like this, but I think it doesnt make entire sense the way it it written. It might sound better if you replace the first ONE with If and the before the second ONE add then. Just a suggestion. Great idea! =)
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