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The World (As I See It)

JUST ME

MYSELF

AND I

LYING HERE

NOTHING BUT

A MESS

I WONDER

WHAT I HAD DONE WRONG

JUST ME

MYSELF

AND I

LYING HERE

NOTHING BUT

A MESS

I WONDER

COULD IT BE

THAT THERE IS NOTHING LEFT

TO FIGHT FOR

JUST ME

MYSELF

AND I

LYING HERE

NOTHING BUT

A MESS

I WONDER

COULD IT BE

THAT THE WORLD IS SO TORN

THAT A RICH MAN WOULD KILL

JUST TO GAIN MONEY

THE ANSWER TO MY QUESTIONS

IS NO

I HAD DONE NOTHING WRONG

AND YES

THE WORLD IS TORN

THE WORLD IS WORN

ENOUGH

FOR A RICH MAN TO KILL

ENOUGH

SO THERE IS NOTHING LEFT

TO FIGHT FOR

THIS MY FRIENDS

IN THE EYES OF THE POET

IS THE WORLD

IN EVERY ASPECT

OF LIFE

Author notes

the thoughts in the poem are explained by more lines following themselves so i don't think i have to really have to tell you how i came up with it unless you're completely clueless (not trying to be rude)

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