she looks at today
and she looks at yesterday;
she sees someone new different
each time she passed a new miror.
her eyes are in love
her heart in pieces
her body stands strong;
but the stability is crumbling slowly
[it's so simple
when you know who you are]
but she couldnt tell you
who she was;
maybe her name,
but nothing more than that.
shes everything different
silently telling the truth
but shes screaming lies
that no one understands
he gave her words to shatter to smile
[even if it was fake]
but she couldnt tell you that either
and she was forced to start
again from ending words
[forevers dont always last a lifetime]
tears wont work this time;
no substitute;no poison
will work if he leaves
and why should she feel
like the end is coming
when they'd just started yesterday?
the fear of losing him
is to great to ignore
but it means nothing
and she couldnt tell you why
he knows she'd be lost without him
but he doesnt know
he'd be lost without her
when she turned the opposite direction
and made her own way
without his yesterdays feeling
m. m. o'malley
7-14-07
Author notes
"i just want to be pretty"
option #3
I can hear you whisper, but you can't hear me screaming
alot of confusion in my life right now and im working through alot and trying to figure out who i am.
HisPrettyLadyCries
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'shes everything different
silently telling the truth
but shes screaming lies
that no one understands
he gave her words to shatter to smile
[even if it was fake]
but she couldnt tell you that either
and she was forced to start
again from ending words'
Oh sweetie, I love this, you aswell [=
I'm still here sweetie, remember [=
I.love.&&.miss.you.sweetie
♥♥♥
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i.miss.you.too.sweetheart.
your an ocean away and thats too far away.
thank you for the comment and the clappy mens.
i.love.love.love.you.too
♥♥♥
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very nice write. i tell that there are a lot of feeling and emotions in the piece, and i can also tell that there is some confusion in your life. its ok though, i know that you will get through it and i know that you will come out better as a person than you did going in. it will just take some time. im glad that you were able to be inspired and write about it, thats the first step to getting through it
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