I am your shadow
Ever lurking, always looking
Stalker of the shallow
Ever staring, never stopping
So brace yourself
For another uncomfortable night
Break yourself
Your mind slowly fades, erases in time
No one will miss you
When you no longer live
No one will kiss
No one ever did
Nobody loves you
Nothing but a burden to all you know
Nobody knows you
And those who do will never admit so.
So brace yourself
For another uncomfortable night
Break yourself
Your mind slowly fades, erases in time
Mame yourself
Destroying what you are, empty inside
Make yourself
see what you are, empty inside
How far will you go
Before you learn that your life is a lie
I've seen you and I know
Everything you do has no affect when you die
Hurry, grab the noose
Every breath you take is nothing but a waste
Do what you can to lose
To escape the life you don't want to face
So brace yourself
For another uncomfortable night
Break yourself
Your mind slowly fades, erases in time
Mame yourself
Destroying what you are
empty inside
Make yourself, see what you are, empty inside
A contest entry
- shock me, PLEASE! (been extended) by Jiyo.
3000 points, ended August 10, 2007, 65 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I know this feeling. I was how to say somebody people didn't want to be associated with in highschool. I can feel good rhythem in this. I read your page and I see you are a bassist and singer. I could see this as part of a song. Not bad.
-Brian -
the first paragraph is very good, and this poem really shows that feeling of being hated by everyone and no one wanting to be around you, I think everyone feels that at least once in a while, good poem
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