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Cascading Love

Time cascades around me
Falling unpredictably like snow flakes in the wind.
Sweet as Honey a voice calls me from a place beyond my comprehension.
Irresistible, yet so much holds me back.
Under the ocean of life sound becomes warped.
Through the rain of existence the cry is dampened.

Clawing my way up steep embankments
Slick with mud I slide down the way I came.
Determined I strike my fingers into the quagmire.
Dragging myself upward with each determined jab.

Thank you Lord

Thank you Lord

Thank you Lord

Thank you Lord

Praise God!

Stretching out my neck I reach the top
Strong Breathe surrounds me, rushes past my face
Restoring lost strength, allowing emotional release
Embraced by Love beyond measure.

I love you Lord with all my heart and all that is within me.

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  • Blueskywonder
    July 24, 2007

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    Apple this is soooo touching... your imagery is powerful... vivid. Your metaphores really do get the point across... i'm so pleased you are determined to find your strength in god.
    This is a beautiful piece of poetry Apple