The Cake in her face,
is all the kinds you want.
The Cake in her face,
"Yumm!!!!!!!!!!" She says.
Another person comes with another cake
and Smashes it in her face.
"Yumm!!!!!!!!" She says.
another person comes up to her
and asks"Do you want to go outside and play?"
"Yum!!!!!!!!!" She says.
That person says"What? Can you say something
other than 'Yum'?"
"Yum!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
That "Yum" girl is Russian
she only knows Yum!!!!!!!!
in english.
Author notes
I don't care if I win or not I just hope you Giggle!
But oh well if I lose
A contest entry
- Please help me cheer up my AP daughter LittleAnn by tawk.
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Thank you for your cute entry, Kiarna got a giggle out of it, especially the cake in the face part, good luck in our contest, Josie & Kiarna
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great!lol funy!
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cute. good luck in the contest
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Nice
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silly!
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Cute
yes indeed sometimes we do the best we can with our languages dont we -
I've read this before and I loved it then. Great write. So funny
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You did make me giggle and thank you for entering.
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This is so funny!! So cute. Great job. Good luck in the contest and thanks for entering Thanks for making LittleAnn smile
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This is really cute, thank you so much for writing this anbd sharing it with me to cheer me up! I assume that you are still a pretty young writer? But for that, you are really good.
I enjoyed reading this.
Keep on writing!
Annie
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Yep
I'm going on 11
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lol. If this doesn't cheer Annie up I don't know what will. I love this. Humorous and all. Even if tawk doesn't give you a trophy for this, appreciation from Annie is an award in itself. Thanks for sharing this. Good luck in the contest.
Brian
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