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Help Me, Save Me.

I tried to fix it,
My heart,
But,
It's still broken,
Now I can't open it back up to anyone,
noone at all,
Someone help me,
someone save me,
Please,
I'm dying,
Drowning in my blood,
I'm dead now,
Dead and deceased,
'Cause noone helped me,
Noone saved me,
And when I needed them the most,
Everyone turned away,
They walked off,
I'm dead,
Dead and deceased,
Covered in my blood,
And noone tried to help me,
Noone tried to save me,
They all turned their heads,
And walked away,
When,
and as I cried out,
"Help me, Saved me!"
I tried to fix it,
But it didn't work,
It's still broken,
And it's worse!

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I wrote this when my ex broke up with me but I'm over him now!

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  • Crimson-Flows
    May 31, 2008
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    So true

    I think this is so true and a broken heart is one of the damn hardest things to put back together!


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    April 28, 2008
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    AWESOME!!!

    I see your pain in this. I am glad you are over it! I just want to say please hold your heart close. Don't just give it away to anyone, it is special & it breaks easily. Trust me I have head my heartbroken to many times to not know. In Love & Light...Blessed Be! ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~