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Gangsters Burial Ground

Perhaps the dignity of it all
could be felt down,
like mutilated corpses in concrete.
(bound to be found out sooner or later!)

Because it's too cliche
to harvest it there;
dropping anchor on the tarmac
just to feel the bounce.

Beaten minds
can't save themselves from insanity,
(nevermind the intelligence)
madness can't just be a photo op
for greedy journalists.

Author notes

written very quickly last night and posted today... just transferring from journa.

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  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    July 25, 2007
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    <3<3<3<3

    LaLaLaLove!!!


    xoxo


  • Exodus gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    *picks jaw up off the ground*
    I knew you had talent, but DAYAM!
    The last two lines are straight up brilliance.