I am famished, have big appetite
Come dine with me, let's do it right
We'll fly to Hawaii's big island
For a luau sumptious and grand
We'll feast from six until dark of night
On succulent roast pig,other Polynesian delight
I am aware that it will cost a lot of moola
But we'll see men surf and pretty girls hula
And then when we are sated and ready we'll go
To a beautiful aloha in the voice of Don Ho.
A contest entry
- Let's Have Dinner! by Ted E Bare.
300 points, ended August 12, 2007, 12 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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yummmy
can I come along
for the ride
and meal and
oh yea the whole thing -
I have never been to Hawaii, but would like to someday. You have a wonderful evening planned I see and could even end very romantically. I want to thank you for entering my "Let's Have Dinner" contest.
Ted E
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