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Not A Happy Ending.

And then,
falling faster downward...

 

   she breaks.

Becoming pieces of herself,
mingled with those belonging
to enemies && allies.


                       It's all in the production;
                      a slow edit finalizing the introduction


        - && desecrating the ending.

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Meh, I don't know.

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  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    July 25, 2007
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    my gawsh babyface!

    this is AHHHmazing


    ILY


  • Exodus gold member
    July 23, 2007

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    Oooooooh! I love it! I like the way the start almost seems like your coming in half way through a story, but you don't miss anything vital. Beautiful babes.