They say it's that which holds us together,
the typical animal attraction.
But I really don't believe it's something like that,
that makes it more than an infatuation.
Remember my Dad used to play us that song,
and we'd catch each other's eyes and blush.
how Amazed we were when that song became ours,
when we knew we were more then a crush.
I used to pretend that you were him,
and I was kissing you instead.
But he doesn't know that detail just yet,
I'd rather keep that up in my head.
They say that it's that which makes you mine,
forever, and always and a day.
But we can lie naked in the same bed,
and it never ends up that way.
I know it's not that which hold us together,
because we flirted for about 2 years,
and I know it's not that for the simple reason,
you're happy just holding me near.
Remember that night of our first kiss,
when tears had run down my cheek,
you had your arm around me, and held me close,
as we talked and walked down the street.
I know it's not that, because you tell me so,
and you always tell me when we're alone,
that more than the moon, and stars at night,
you love me more then I'll ever know.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very moving. I'm glad you've found someone who loves you so unconditionally. Thanks for sharing this write.
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i loved it.... i really did. when i was reading it i knew it was you talking and i could almost hear ur voice as if i were in ur head! lol it was fantastic and very moving and alothough u dont say what "that" is, the reader really gets a sense of what it is.
i know who this poem is about and im glad ur together because u seen happy.
well done, fantastic!
celphie xx
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WOW!.. I really love LOVE this poem... Has so much emotion and feelings to it...I mean it is so happy but at times so sad Like I wanna cry... But cry not sure why or about what...Love it
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Awwwwwwwww Midnight (I know, i'm a guy but i'm gona say it anyway!), this poem is really sweet! And i'm betting I know who it is about too hehe You've done a fantastic job of this poem, it flows very smoothly and all the words seem really nice and fitting for where they've been placed.
The rhyme structure faltered slightly at the end (sorry! i'm being pedantic again!), but it doesn't take anything away from this poem.
It's a beautiful read, well done Midnight, speak to you soon x
SaintJimmy
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