I know you love me baby, in a hundred different ways
a ‘hello, darlin’ in the mornin’ fills my day’s bouquet,
and all day long, in quiet moments, I can hear the words,
‘I love you, baby,’ ‘tis the sweetest sound I’ve ever heard.
One look from you is all it takes to send me to the moon,
a silent grin, a tender kiss, we slow dance to your tune,
a bluesy sound, you hold me close, your hands run down my hips,
I feel an urgent pounding, touch taut grooves with fingertips.
I’m mesmerized by your blue eyes, warm breath upon my skin,
my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,
you pick me up and carry me, your charms I can’t refuse
My arms are tight around you, lost amidst love’s lusty hues.
Your head upon my belly, then your lips start to explore,
your hands arouse me, darlin’, and I’m begging you for more,
the earth moves when you touch me and your candle burns inside
the deepest part of we fulfilled, I love you, love our ride.
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Written August 31st, 2003
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I've read this before and didn't remember the title. Still great,classy work! worth reading again! How r things with u? Family still with u?
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Must read, this should be a classic
Romantic and classy. Flows so well, the words wrapped around this reader, like a warm fuzzie blanket on a cold winter's night. Your images here, jump start the imagination and let it flow wherever it carries one. These encounters with our significant other, carry us through all the rough spots of day to day living. Thanks for making my Saturday, a little brighter. Beautiful work, brought out the hopeless romantic in me. God Bless You and family, hope the Home front is still going well? Beautiful background, like old handmade lace and bead work. Really places your poem in a special time frame for me the reader. Keep penning! Never disappointed when I get to read here! Excellent work!
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ahh! I really like this, its romantic and it creates a warm fuzzy feeling... its easy to write about stuff that you hate, but its rare that people can find the right words to say, and explain how they feel...- I really enjoyed reading this, thanx for sharing!!
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This piece make me want to love you
you are so talented and also write some more
i like these love poems
i only write hate poems
im different
but i like the way you express your feelings
good luck for the future
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Must be a great feeling, Im glad one of us is able to experience it. Well done on the expression of such, I commend you for your adroitness in writing.
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I love the smooth down-home style of your writing. This is simply worded and yet so sensuous. You have a certain charm in all your poems which make them so enjoyable to read. I can see the happiness in these people's lives and feel the joy they experience just being together. Great writing.
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very smooth, sweet, and romantic.....congratulations...
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lovin it. your word choice was amazing, and i like how you conveyed the feelings of being in love. wonderful job
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love-filled for the one she loves!
it was great. im glad to read some love pieces on here as i rarely see any, the only ones i have seen are by iheartyou and my wife who has a page on here
it makes me happy that you also feel like this for te one you love, i found my true love online a yr ago and now im married! im glad you feel this way for someone when me and my wife first met it was so nervewracking! but now we have a child and are still very deeply in love...great read
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Beautiful!
Hot stuff! Be careful with burning candles inside.
Excellent!
Marcellus -
Ahh you probably know at least a little how much I have needed those stolen moments myself, and they make the rest of the moments bearable. Nicely done.
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Now this is interesting - rhyming sensuality that didn't bore me or make me laugh. This pulled me into the mood, set a scene for me in my mind. Had me thinking some really warm and fuzzy, yet terribly impure thoughts. And that, my dear, is when you know you have written a good poem. I wasn't aroused by the words themselves, but by the vibe that came from them. I was impressed is my point. I apologize for rambling all over the place.
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great
very romantic piece I felt it any gut would love this its so sweet and makes me feel like the words are in love with it because your stuff is hot -
wooohoo!.. Im here on my knees.. come my lady.. this slave at your service..hehehe. love it!
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Delicious write here Becky, and yes love is like that is it not? "My skin burns where you've been", absolutely love that line, so real and relatable. You have a definite flair in capturing intimacy. And yes love the "ride" too. Great way to start my day, thanks.
Henri -
this is amazing, great poem! has a smooth rhythm to it, i am lovin this
blueyes -
'i love our ride'
and is love just that no? a ride, and a crazy one at that. wi' all the passion nd then heat, intertwinde wi' th sweet nd not so sweet moments, love is balanceing our needs wi' anothers, and seeing where each new moment will take us. ye do it well ye know, write of love, tis as watching a freeze frame unfold before mi eyes, and the sweetest love.... sung in low timber blues.
arden
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Not sure, but from the title, I'd say something about forbidden fruit and how glorious it tastes. Perhaps it's the danger surrounding it, or perhaps its more of the awareness of how special things are that tend to get lost in the day-to-day settings. Either way, the write is one of beauty and sensous expression of desires that leaves the reader envious!
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::siZzle siZzle:: this poem was hot! i love it. it made me smile.
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-This poem has a beautiful flow! Just perfect. Like a song. Like country music with guitars strumming. I really enjoyed the sound of it in my head.
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Sounds a bit like a song to me, can almost hear it play in my
mind as I read. It got that lyrics flow to it... Simple, but very
sweet and touching Lovely read
Jen
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Hello Neighbor,
You have another winner here, but of course you already know that without me saying so. Sorry it has taken me so long to get back around. Will try not to take so long next time.
Damon D. Brewer -
Nice rhythm and mood.
It is beautiful when you grow close enough to feel so strong.
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True love and true passion are rare and wonderful things (especially when they occur at the same time with the same person!!!I'm kidding here
You have brought a beautiful love poem and blended searing sensuality into it too, and balanced it perfectly. a lovely read, thank you
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i reallu like your use of words very sentual and very intimate thanks for sharing
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A deep care inside the sensuality...
An old feeling to this... like a couple has had time
time together to truely know eachother
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This one was rather steamy, yet quite loving all at the same time...it is a wonderful thing to have the best of both worlds...heat and romance all in the same package...never good to just have one or the other. This read very nicely. Enjoyed
UB
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The scented secret essence burns,
Nightwinds call and passion turns,
Into a deep and secret prayer,
Of touch and taste, caress and care.
The heart becoms a radio,
A gentle song so soft and low,
The very music of the spheres,
For rapture never disappears.
Within a song that knew not sound.
Truley all of wonder found.
The silken weight of passion spent,
That finds the wanting heart content.
Drink the wine of the mountainside,
The laughing stream she could not hide,
The burning flame that not consume,
And all the roses as they bloom.
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smiling blissfully here, loved this one
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Oooooh Becky.. some afternoon delight here.. very nicely done.. YUMMY!!! liked the tickle on the tum part.. soft and loving write ...
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Great!
My husband calls me baby
He says that I am dear
I love to be called baby
When he whispers in my ear...
I love this poem, it just tickles me inside. It is very sexy in a gentle kind of way. It has a permanent smile across my face. The flow and weaving of words is so tender. Great expression of love. Keep sharing!
Peace
~poetryality~
Renee
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Yowza!! love this. It sizzles with a subtle sensuality that oozes love in the purest form. Thanks for that.
Henri -
A country style yummy write with "tasty" parts to it that would make any healthy reader ponder....... (lol)...........
... this is extremely passionate and delivered in a smooth steady tempo that keeps the reader in it. Very high quality lure and writing technique in this. Keep these coming. It is nice.
Don -
Eep! *Blushes at mental images*
*cough*
Love the emotion and descriptions, so much passion! Your sense of rhyme and rythm (sp?) is spectacular!
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Superb
Absolutely beautiful!
the rhythm,the rhymes,the pace,the sensuality,the passion....... a vivid depiction of desire...... Damn, you are good at this. -
Oh, wowee, sis. I hope you weren't watchin' the same movie I was and what reminded me . shirks and winces . Oh..Never mind..lol.
"my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been"
A sizzle. Was this someone you might have met at one of your BBbbbbbbaaaauuuurbeques??? Hmmmmmmm...? lol. Love ya, CookieZeal/Di -
Lossa comments! Yup flowed really well,
also like Lusty line. Great line.
Lute sad cause he got brown eyes.
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Oooh, this is gorgeous dreaming on the moon where romance lives. I love the constant sense of the pounding that you established by the list of places he would touch and things he would do. Love it.
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I was captivated by your words.
Beautiful poem!
Very sensual.. enjoyed each word
GypsyDreamer
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her face reflects the love she feels..it oozes from the gleam in her eyes..sometimes as a tear other times as a whimsical smile...her blonde hair pulled back and her lips hang petulant awaiting his next kiss.....she is symetrical in love expecting two like things side by side..liking some of the same things....she is symitar.....simple quiet beauty with the grace of time and hope etched there on her porcelain skin...Artis
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Sensual yet tender and sweet at the same time... clever rhymes... imbued with a great sense of rhythm. This piece was quite musical, too, and I enjoyed reading it immensely.
Thanks!
- El Gio -
It's like an endless whisper riding the breeze, warming our hearts, it's like a candle lighting the darkness, showing us how great is love, and it's not like any other love poem
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Sigh (those were the days). As they say in Minnesota, "Yah, sure. You betcha." The population increases by a point or two every September, as the winters tend to drive people inside, if you know what I mean. This poem exhales, every so trembling it nearly holds and caresses the moments themselves, giving them life. Collapse. What's my name? Another fun one (enjoyed). ET
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Wow lady, you have said it all! You are one of the best writers I have seen here on AP. I feel blessed to have been one of the few to come upon your poems in all of these thousands and to be able to enjoy them so much and understand them and know that I have felt everything you have written about. Keep writing lady and I will keep reading....
signed your #1 fan
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you have done a wonderful job on this and it is sure filled with lots of love....real love...tammy
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this is so beautiful..
my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,
My arms are tight around you, lost amidst love’s lusty hues.
a ‘hello, darlin’ in the mornin’ fills my day’s bouquet,
**I adored these lines.. make me sigh longingly
Something so refreshing in the way you've written this - a lot of love poems can be redundant or cliche.. this has wit and charm.
do come see me
~Scarlet
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Very Good
Wow I've been there and loved this poem and loved my ride back there too. Excellent imagery that took me back to revisit rides of passion in my many yesterdays. May you always have such passion to "slow dance to its tune".
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This one is just yummy
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'grins ear to ear' now thats the sweet stuff. just the sheer love in this took my breath away.
' lost amidst love’s lusty hues.' not entirely sure
where that line came from but oh, did it sweep me away...
hmmm, lusty hues...... marvelous.
arden
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This made my face break into a smile! What a beautiful expression of love, desire, with a smattering of erotica thrown in to taste. Some gorgeous lines in this one and I like how it rhymes, giving it rhythm to really make it come alive in the reader's head. Great write, much enjoyed!
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I finally was able to get to your site again and as usual you brought a smile to my face ......I almost found myself singing this . Everything was perfect , the flow ...well , it FLOWED and the feelings come across as if in a live performance { you always hold me hostage with your words }
love ,
Reenie
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Hot, sensous..and leaves it to the imagination of the reader.
There is something warm and loving about lovemaking..about
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*WAY HAPPY* wow!!! i loved this poem! it totally made me think of a memory i had with my sweetie a long time ago, it made my heart squeeze to read this, its so sweet! wonderful job!
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such a seductive trance you sing lovely
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Such a sensuous, romantic, and lovely dance...
Here's a
to wear in your hair.
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awesomeness! Very sexy and delicate...makes you really want to fall in love and stay in love forever amd ever! I'm really digging this! You're a great poet!
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There are love poems and there are love poems....THIS is a love poem!! (and one done very, very well)
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Where goest thee beloved light,
And air of finer places.
To shine so brightly in my sight,
My very soul embraces.
Beauty beyond all of price,
And fragrant blossom smell,
Sheer grace, devoid of artifice,
And loved so very well.
Darlin is as darlin does,
That only truth might stand.
That in the end truth only was,
The touch of your sweet hand. 
oops (ahem) Eagleridge?????
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Becky ~
This is wonderful. Very soft and sensuous. I enjoyed it very much. Your rhymes flow so smoothly. Excellent write. I especially like the line:
a ‘hello, darlin’ in the mornin’ fills my day’s bouquet,
Another fantastic write from one of my favorite AP Poets.
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your candle burns me where you have been....
dubba,
can I throw you an iced down martini?
this was luscious is the greatest of style
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Sensual, sexual, simply wonderful. This is the best love poem i have read on AP. There's nothing more i can say- Well done this is simply a wonderful write!
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WONDERFUL.
Not entirely sure what I can add to the show of praise thus far, but I really feel I have to give /something/.
Fantastic. Absolutely fantastic. I don't think I could possibly change a *thing*. You've got amazing language, full of imagery; your diction is all but flawless. I love the alliterations, the way you can be almost tongue-tied while reading it aloud, as though having that heart-pounding feeling one gets when alone with a lover.
Definitely sensual. The rhyme and metre are positively brilliant, and I really enjoyed it, top to bottom.
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Cartwheels
Wonderful work, I found this to be easy, and musical,
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wow, that was amazing. I could feel the love pouring out in this peice. you have a way with words and I look forward to reading more of your work. this was great writting. keep it flowing
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such a poignant affair.. soft yet strong.. beautiful like a the sun in springs morning... eloquent... pen on!!!
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I enjoyed this immensely. I think I have a new favourite Symitar write. Seriously, the flow and metre in this were flawless- I'm left in complete shock.
And I do believe this is the first poem I've read by you with such sexual connotations. That's cool though, I loved the subtley you employed. I think I'm incapable of that.
Ah, stolen moments are cool. And you do them justice here.
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Becky this is a 'gem' - it has a feel of (dare I say) marriage about it. I could relate so much to the feeling and emotion you expressed - maybe because I'm a l-o-n-g time married woman it's the way I interpreted your words.
Either way it's a beauty.
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Hi Neighbor, you did an excellent job writing this one. I think sultry and senusous without getting to graphic and explicit is good; this was that and then some. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this write by you as I have almost all of yours.
Damon D. Brewer -
I can visualise this or comment on it like it merits, but hey, its much more fun to visualise. lol this IS excellant and sooooo seductive oh my.
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Whoa, Girl, love this one to pieces. It is completely delicious!
I’m mesmerized by your blue eyes, warm breath upon my skin,
my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,... but what a fantastic burn, huh? Exquisitte piece.
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Sensous
I loved every minute of it, hung on to every word, made me melt with desire, can't wait til my man gets home... Great flow, word play, and everything that makes for a sensous, sultry, sublime, source of sensations. Keep the flow going on and on and on...
Lovers are the best two people in the world to me...
Keep sharing!
Much Love,
Renee
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Very Nice writting.
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Some beautiful lines and consistent all the way through... you can't help but smile at it!
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when i started reading the poem..i thought it would just explore the emotional avenues. it turned out to be a surprise ...that was, i agree with silent poet here ......" deliciously romantic "
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that was fucken awesome. it was like a sexy love poem. and ive felt those same words. it had a good rhyme and the part where it says "i love our ride" uh huh girl, keep it up, great write, much love!!!!!!
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omgs hun, this is incredible, so senusal and just gorgeous sighs one of my faves by far. although i love all your work, this one...just love it.
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Wow! Very sultry and sensual and deliciously romantic....my favorite line is the same as everyone else's....whew, I'm having hot flashes now! LOL! This is one time that "gettin' the blues" might actually be a good thing! Perfect rhyme and tempo and....well, just perfect! Hugs and blessings to you! ~Janet~
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sexillent
Put this write to a low down blues beat and you've got a hit. Love it Becky, but you know I've always called you darlin'. You have a unique talent of writing about love making without offending anyone. Wish I could be so subtle. I really do like this one. Thanks for sharing. Loveya darlin', jean. -
Oh yes, now this I like!
"I love you, love our ride" -and what a splendid ride, indeed... to be loved so intensely by another - there's nothing like it. You've done well to weave sensuality and love into one tight little poem. Excellent write Becky! This poem is filled with so much warmth... I love where your words took me. Thanks & take care, Helen -
Well , you wicked little wench
This was soooooo sensuous and you kept it so clean
But I know whay you have been doing and where you have been
Really enjoyed this a lot , and yes I agree too with Maryannede , being called "darlin" has such a special smooth ring too it , reminds me of what I imagine a southern gentleman to be like . I live on the East Coast .....but I sure like the "southern hospitality" and I also love the western " giddy up and go " mentality . Actually do not have too much fondness for the cityslickers of the East Coast {snobs and wannabes }
Thx for this peek into your womanhood ....go get them girlfriend
Reenie
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Nice - romantic without being vomit inducing, sexy without being embarassing. Well done. I particularly liked the line:
"a ‘hello, darlin’ in the mornin’ fills my day’s bouquet"
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A beautiful sensual write with a brilliant flow. Shows a love so perfect and so sublime. Really well done
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~ siggggggghs ~ what a wonderful tempo. Grinzz... Sultry, sensual...filled with emotion and temptation, you for him, him for you... fulfilled...
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my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,"
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MMMMM....I agree with Mary Ann this is also my favorite line:
"my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,"
Delicious image Becky...thanks for reminding me what two people in love can share...on a daily basis.
Lanny -
The fire became beacon,in the colors of its gleaming,
A scarlet sword of irredecent hue.
She hears hisphrases spoken, as one dreaming.
Of a prophecy coming true.
Come as wewalk through the seam of cration,
Into consensual uncertaintees
Carry your case to the court of the last resort,
A cross road of all dstinees
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Something about a man calling me Darlin..and not darling...that just makes me weak.
"my neck, my cheeks, my eyes, my lips, my skin burns where you’ve been,"
Loved this line..
and the entire write flowed like warm honey... hmmmm sounds very nice.
Hugs.. wonderful indeed!
Mary ann
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as the candle waxes and wanes it leaves a warm glow that last for days...and the feeling of being in that circle of light is heavenly indeed...nice job becky.....symetrical and everything...Artis
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