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A Killer Romance

I'll light you up baby
You know I'll set you on fire
You know what I say is true
Because I've never been a liar

I'm gonna let you inside me
Once again, I don't care if it kills
I love everything about you
Especially how your smoothness feels

Your an addiction I don't wanna be without
You always make me feel so good
I'll suck up every ounce of you
Just like I know I should

In a crowd or all alone
The thrill of getting caught make it exciting
The adrenalin turns me on
Like an unexpected bolt of lightening

I'll set you out like a prostitute
Passing you around the group
They all want what you have to offer
You know you can calm the troop

And they'll be coming back
Cuz they all know your the best
They'll keep asking me for more
Never leaving me to rest

Yet you know what we have
Will be ending soon
But before I put you out
I'll look up at the moon

And think of the day that passed by
As I linger with you butt in my hand
I know I'll be back to you soon
Cuz baby, we both know you're in high demand

Author notes

just for those of you who couldnt guess by reading the poem, this is not a bout a person but my addiction to cigarettes... just thought id show the cancer sticks some love. hehe

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  • delightfulmess silver member
    July 25, 2007

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    Love this love this
    Great Job had me fooled
    I was not sure...
    but I was thinking you were passing around a vibrater.

    I was like euwwww LMAO
    Great job thank you for the


    Delila


  • ninchick08
    July 23, 2007
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    omg thats good. haha nice


  • MonGrandAmour
    July 23, 2007
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    Wow really killing romance. I was feeling its about women but its about cig.. Keep it up dude


  • no-longer-a-member-
    July 23, 2007

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    Well... I could think up another title for this... Killing me Softly ... lol, stupid joke

    Nicely written, don't kill yourself now


    • fallenstar588
      July 23, 2007
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      naw, i wouldnt kill myself, love my cigs too much... but seriously, ive been there tried that. and im not goin back.

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