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Saying good-bye

You had so say good-bye
to a precious one
whose heart
cuddled and nurtured you.

You had to say good-bye
to a loving one
whose heart
had a special place for you.

You had to say good-bye
to an exceptional one
whose heart
had a mother’s love for you.

You had to say good-bye
to God’s willed one
to always carry her
in your heart.

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A dear friend of mine has recently lost her mom - some would my friend as Estelle.

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  • Devils Reject
    August 16, 2007
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    this is so beautiful......it makes emotions tht i buried long ago come back to the surface. bravo!!


    • FransB gold member
      August 16, 2007
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      Devils Reject

      Thank you - could I ask your comment to my poem: The Letter? Frans

  • Helmuth
    July 23, 2007
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    Great

    You touched my heart and now.....I miss mine to


  • myrataal silver member
    July 23, 2007

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    AH! Frans!

    I can but weep for her, for if she is the friend we both know, and if the deceased is the woman I so often hugged and was hugged by her in smile and with embrace, I too mourn ... but NOT as one without hope.

    Wondrous words ... you are a true Poet. A special friend. A guide on this road. May we cup our hands to not let the tears vanish in dry soil, may we pour it back into the Fountain of Origin, as confirmation and as token of deep Love.

    Love to you, always,
    Myra