fast talker, slow mover.
stirrin the coffee
absentmindedly.
thousand mile a minute
thoughts
breakin the
sound barrier.
slow talker, fast mover.
i dont move as fast as you,
pardon me,
i only smell
your strange sweat.
give it time to make it
sweet, you silly
son of a gun.
Give me the minute to
savor,
to dream,
and then ask me
the time.
good mornin,
sunshine.
I made some coffee,
and left out a cup.
Feel free to make it
as you like.
could you use a little breakfast?
i love a hot breakfast on a
snowy snowed-in morning,
dont you?
how do you like your eggs,
and how are your feelings
on rye toast and butter?
Hope you dont mind Billy Joel,
he's still rock and roll to me and
he sounds lovely against
the background of
Jah smoke.
maybe we'll get lucky and
Spike will show
Indiana Jones and the
Raiders of the Lost Ark.
i cant think of a better way to spend
the afternoon in sweats.
Please,
make yourself at home
while i take Leopold out
for his quick mornin
doggie whiz.
oh,
its so cold out,
you sure you want
to join us?
dont you want to stay warm on the
couch under the blanket?
well,
then,
be my guest-
I have an extra hat and
I think Adam left
an extra coat or two around.
oh...
(giggle)
he probably isnt your
massive size.
ha ha.
thank god leopold will hurry,
he doesnt like ice between
his toes at all.
We will hurry,
so we can relax
and i hope
dippy eggs dont gross
you out.
even if they do,
you wont remember in a minute
after we pass the peace again.
fast talker, slow mover.
slow talker, fast mover,
take your time in your
sublime movement.
and i will learn to
speak less.
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"I made some coffee,
and left out a cup.
Feel free to make it
as you like."
and also
"
even if they do,
you wont remember in a minute
after we pass the peace again.
fast talker, slow mover.
slow talker, fast mover,
take your time in your
sublime movement.
and i will learn to
speak less."
this was all mixed up and warbly and beautiful.
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a most delightful read, and a contrast between the two distinct mode of speakers, a tad long but you seem to have executed a excellent piece of writing here, and as you can tell i like what i read, no offer of critique at this time, cause i'm not much of a critic with works as such! Thanks for sharing!
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This was so funny!!!
Sorry I'm in a hurry, c you soon xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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hey good magical breakfast here metro, the flow of this reality mixed with tinges of abstraction is a picture well photographic water, fresh as, for me i would definetly be in the slow talker catergory, alike speaking with silence is devine, anyhoo any zen, cheers for the walk around your jazzy block, w shiraz and chilli chocolate -jas
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NICE TO HEAR FROM YOU AGAIN! yes, how ya be!
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I like the flow - everyone has it
their own rhythm of unconsciousness
streaming subconscious into word
consonant blank with vocals
and private bits of selfish selflessness
different is always a gain
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different is a good thing, let me marinate on that....have a great day!
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This is different and i like it!! Pretty upbeat and a lot of racing thoughts trying to fit in and they do. Love Billy Joel and saw him live and love breakfast in bed
a lot of pondering and happy resolution! Instant karma.
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hey thanks for reading! i am trying a new thing, writing down my day dreams...maybe i will move into short stories next...yes, billy joel. ya cant help but love him. have a great day!
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