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Sliding to the Floor

A pull, a nudge, a slight of hand
And my clothes have fallen away
Crumpled and dejected
They slide to the floor

Touching skin and not heart
Shivers from kisses and not words
His body over mine, pushing the air out of me
I can’t catch my breathe
I can’t breath

My body has never been so electrified
Floating so distantly from my mind
I want this, I want this
And yet
My hands remember different skin
My body remembers a different embrace
I can’t help but think, “Was that more?”

A nuzzle, a kiss, a gaze
And my heart is left undefended
Yet nothing is there to catch it
And it slides to the floor

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debate on whats better: emotional closeness, or physical closeness, and if there was a choice between the two, is that choice possible

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  • KnightLady
    September 5, 2007

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    WOWlong time since i have came across your page.............any how i remember feeling like this at one point ....any how im not going to ramble anymore this was powerfull

    ~liz~~