Warrior girl head held high
Glowing sword by her hip
Dark eyes flashing
As she calls a battle cry
Standing with her legions
Ready to fight
Standing with her armies
Death to those they fight
All with glowing shields
With the goddess standing strong
The woman of the mother
Letting the enemy’s blood run
Marching together heads held high
For this cause none of them
None are afraid to die
To let their blood fall
To the one who gave them life
Warrior women to live
And also to die
Author notes
was bored in legal
tell me wat u think
In a list
A contest entry
- Give me your 100th poem by Loveandblessings2u.
975 points, ended March 16, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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" Warrior girl head held high "
Now I really like this line.
Perfect opening.
Reminds me how strong a woman could be,
like no one could knock us down.
Very good,
and good luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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This is a very good poem, I like the story behind it, it makes me want to know more about the people - maybe you could create a series of poetry on these people and their world? The only thing that I didn't really think fit the poem was 'fight' as an end word twice in the second stanza... but apart from that this was an interesting read
Keep writing
Polly -
This is really good sweety and yeah a book is a good Idea you have much talent.Thnaks for sharing best wishes
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omg i wont u to write a book this is so awsome pumpkin
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a wonderful write you d awsome writes so dont argue lol. i loved the imagery in this and i lovd how it came to life as i rread it. it was a wonderful write well done
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